Knightmare.com

Hello

I got a bit bored listening to Eurovision last night and started to pen down a fanfic story. Ive uploaded the pages to the net and you can find them here:

http://groups.msn.com/Pipmuk/shoebox.msnw

Youre free to download the image and resize it if you cant see it...

Hope you like it! If lots of people like it then i will write some more! Any comment is welcome, good or bad.

Pipmuk

Sorry, Pipmuk, I can scarcely read it.

May I recommend you copy the story out into Wordpad or something and then upload it to www.fanfiction.net?

I've written a Knightmare Fan Fic enitiled Series 9.

That's right it's Series 9 of Knightmare in Story format.

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1882407

Please Read & Review and post you thoughts about it.

And...

LIVE IN FEAR!!!

I just wondering has anyone read this Fic because I've had not a single Review or thought yet.

Please tell me you thoughts and Reviews.

I will begin work Chapter 2 by Monday.

Well, I'm not sure what to say because I started to read it and didn't want to review without finishing it, but personally I'm finding it fairly difficult to read since it is more like a script than a piece of fiction. I actually didn't think ff.net allowed stuff in script form (don't quote me on that) but I suppose if you don't get caught you're fine

Either way, personally I'm having difficulty plodding through it. If you'd like to make it a little more reader friendly for a wider audience, perhaps you could put it into prose form, it may help, but this is nothing more than a suggestion since I may well be the only one struggling with it.

"(Treguard walks into his anti-chamber with his sword out.)" did make me giggle though. Bad Emii

I'll get my editors to sought it out... if they can.

I've read it. I thought it was fun. If you write more chapters, I'll probably read those too!

Chapter 2 will be up soon.

I'm going to revise Chapter 1 to change the format from Script format to Story format to make it easier to read.

That's why I'm taking so long to write the next chapter but it will be up I promise.