Knightmare.com

My scribbles are up on knightmare.com...

There pretty good !

Thankies  ;D

Woohoo! The Interactive Story is finally up, too! Knice.

Two slight niggles, though (I'm sorry - under normal circumstances I do not niggle, unless it's about me). First, perhaps the blurb on the front page should mention that it has been contributed to by Tim Child. Secondly, maybe it should have been put into chapters and made to scan slightly better. The part that tries to explain why and how the Helmet Of Justice disappeared doesn't quite work.

PLEASE don't kill me! I'm just eager to see the story made into the best that it can possibly be.

OK, I'm done.

HEY! I spend a week copying and pasting and tweaking and changing fonts and forgetting to back up and computer crashing and losing the lot and having to start all over again! In the end, I considered chapters but I couldn't cos I was getting achy eyes from looking at screens and doctor told me to stay away from the things for a few days so I just saved and sent as soon as it was done.
So ner.
I didn't change the helmet thing cos that is part of its charm. Slip ups are all part of the interactivity - thats what YOU said when I mentioned it to you! STOP CONTRADICTING YOURSELF! Plus it WAS remedied.
If you have any ideas to do more, please feel free to tweak yourself. My computer has crashed several times since and I'm not taking chances.
Thank you  ;D

(cor dear. Was that a rant or an update? Sorry to anyone I offend...)

Hehe. OK, sorry. I can't remember mentioning about leaving slip-ups intact, though. Thanks very much indeed, though.

Actually, my computer is currently out of commission due to coming back off holiday to find the Blaster virus had taken up residence. Consequently, I'm not going back onto the internet until it has been removed and a decent virus checker has been installed. I'm typing this on a computer in the library.

Anyway, thanks!

Pleasure

*goes off to draw more pictures*