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Welllllllllllll from what I read of Ms Kully, I am most certainly looking forward to acting with her in April :)
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Kully sends you all a kiss, and reminds me that she is going to be in the next fanfic I do, with a few surprises.
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Mwah  :-* to Kully
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Kully sends you all a kiss, and reminds me that she is going to be in the next fanfic I do, with a few surprises.
I've just got around to reading the latest one. Very good, I must say. :)
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lol thankies
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Ok guys...likl dilemma. 'Kully' was around 13 pages long. This current fanfic has reached 4 pages in half an hour and the situation has only just been introduced...is that bad? It's sounding to me a bit Lord of the Ringsy too right now. Is that also bad? I keep thinking I'll get ragged at for using LOTR creatures...but I'm having fun writing it :S
HELP!
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Four pages can bring a lot of atmosphere etc, but I suggest you cut it down a little so the action can be brought forward a bit, otherwise you'll end up writing about 500 pages :)

There isnt too much wrong with it sounding like LOTR, as it was...well, good!

All I can suggest is try and concentrate on the most important bits of the build up to the story, and try and get to the action quicker.  But there again, I don't know what on earth you have written do I?  So I'll let you decide, and I know full well you have good writing capabilities anyway.

The choice is yours :)
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Thank you! Anyone else care to help?
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Just my humble opinion, but I'd say you shouldn't worry about the length of a story while you're writing it. Let it come naturally, being as long as it wants to be. Then, once it's done, leave it for a day, then come back to read through it. That way, it's easy to see if it's too quick, too long, or just right. Hope that helps! :)
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Thank you! Nic now has it and says he will put it up next update. Enjoy.
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WHO'S READ MY FIC...

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Well?
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Damn, there are just not enough hours in the day...! I can't read it now as I have to rush off to catch the most luxurious of all coaches, the National Express; I wanted to print it off and take it on the coach with me, but my catridge has died on me, goddamnit! So now I am resigned to continuing another crappy novel during the journey and waiting to read your Fic when I get to Manchester. Is there no justice in this world?? >:(
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LOL Thankies *glomp*
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Well?
I HAVE! I HAVE!  ;D
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Me. Honest!

Very well written, and everything was in character. I always wondered why no teams tried that on the causeways before.
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