And a couple more issues of The Quest. Again, some of the spelling mistakes may have appeared in the original newsletter, in which case I don't know if you prefer to correct them or keep them in, but I've highlighted them anyway. (I think it would be more enjoyable if it was easier to read, so it may be worth fixing the punctuation and blatant typos / scanning errors at least.)
http://www.knightmare.com/fanzine/108/1 ... t-212.html
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...have fallen on death ears..." Should be "deaf"!!
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...so that we don't all have to listen to him practicing..." Should be "practising".
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...after this a short list if drawn up..."
http://www.knightmare.com/fanzine/108/1 ... t-213.html
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...unless the Powers That Be surrender!!" Missing a quote mark.
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If you will kindly quieten down..." Missing a quote mark.
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Lord Fear has spies everywhere, so I must be brief" - needs a full stop.
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Frightknights will surround the village" - needs a full stop.
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All the village children bring buckets of water" - needs a full stop.
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We will win, we will win, we will win!!"" Missing a quote mark.
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Treguard muttered a reply1..."
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The Frightknights stopped what they were doing faced Hordriss," - needs a comma after "doing".
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As they did so, a noise erupted from their metal" - needs a full stop.
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You saved the villagers and the Powers That Bell" - I assume the l's should be exclamation marks?!
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Perhaps you should crawl back to you dingy hove..."
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With that be disappeared..."
http://www.knightmare.com/fanzine/108/1 ... 214-5.html
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...some pretty wierd things..."
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...Marlene Deitrich..."
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Our visit to Cheltenham was going to he a chance..."
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Daddy acking in Chom Pom with On-go" - I presume this should say "Oo-go" (Hugo) as in the previous instance.
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...and Tolah got down to the job of re-creating the cit." Name should be Tulah according to the previous sentence. What is the "cit"?? Should it say "elf" perhaps?
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...I knew the show would he doomed."
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We needn't have worried" - should this have a dash or semicolon after it?
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...a dozen jimmys..." Needs a capital J.
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With an "ooh" and an "aah" and bags of laughter the show whistled by" - needs a full stop.
http://www.knightmare.com/fanzine/108/1 ... t-216.html
~ This author of this story isn't credited - was it omitted from the newsletter?
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Last year everyone down at the Castle had a great time of it over the festive season" - needs a full stop.
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perhaps he was thinking..." Needs a capital P.
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Oh don't he ridiculous"
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Brother Mace was busy preparing the dinner" - needs a full stop.
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It was tradition for at the Castle..." I don't think the word "for" should be there.
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Suddenly, a cry went up, and everyone turned to see Elita stuck on top of the Christmas tree!" This sentence is included twice - the first has a couple of errors but the second is correct.
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...now exactly who's jokes were you saying weren't funny?" Should be "whose".
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I think this one's hilarious!" Missing a quote mark.
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"I can't say I was impressed with the did Sidriss, examining one of the used crackers." Eh? Apart from the missing quote mark, I'm not even sure what this is supposed to say!
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I even went all the way to Harrolds to get the big place in the centre of the forest." Eh??
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"I'm sorry Pickle, but I have to agree" said Treguard. /" Random forward slash!
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...said Gundrada sounding rather dismayed" - needs a full stop.
~ The "Next Page" link takes you to page 7 of the previous issue.
http://www.knightmare.com/fanzine/108/1 ... t-217.html
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...and the nasty Lord Fear" - needs a full stop.
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...and with him on our side a against Lord Fear..." Random "a" needs removing.
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If so, sort of characters would you like to in Knightmare?" Seems to be missing the words "what" and "see".
http://www.knightmare.com/fanzine/108/1 ... t-221.html
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...Arlo Wörts has come up trumps with our Smirk with Smirkenorf cartoon..."
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...so, as you can seem..."
http://www.knightmare.com/fanzine/108/1 ... t-222.html
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...dressed in this years most conveted T-Shirt..."
http://www.knightmare.com/fanzine/108/1 ... t-223.html
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...hut merely because all humans find elves simultaneously entrancing and infuriating."
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It seems to have moved further away than ever today" - needs a full stop.
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...we don't loose track of magic..."
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It's certainly true that not all faerie is good, in those and wrong, cruel and kind, fair and fool." This sentence doesn't appear to make sense, but I'm not sure what it ought to say. I also wonder if the "fool" is meant to be "foul".
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There a many different names..."
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In Knightmare. Pooka's don't always attack..." Should be a comma, not a full stop. (There shouldn't really be an apostrophe there either...)
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Geists. or Stormgeists can also be disturbed..." Should be a comma, not a full stop.
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Geists prove fatal, but they can cause considerable damage to Life Force..." Is this sentence missing the word "rarely"?
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Goblins of course, we have a plenty." Should be one word.
http://www.knightmare.com/fanzine/108/1 ... 224-5.html
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I'm sorry Master but I am afraid you'll have to speak up!" shouted Pickle!". There shouldn't be a quote mark at the end.
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The village we are heading is for Castleden!" Should be "for is" I think.
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...on the otherside of Woldglade!"
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"But how can we ever hope to reach Knightmare castle from here in this weather?" He asked," - needs a small "h" and a full stop.
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"Now that the storm has gone we can go straight to Knightmare Castle and" - missing a quote mark.
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...raised a little too tar"
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We if must hurry on Master!" The "if" shouldn't be there.
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...and they set of again."
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"Oh no!" Exclaimed Pickle." Should be a small "e".
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The next thing that they were aware of was aloud banging..." Should be two words.
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...what a pleasure it Is to see you again..." Should be a small "i".
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...but he warned, it could take you anywhere!"
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...the events of the last fewminutes..."
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...as he strode purposely forward..." Should be "purposefully".
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"I know this place said Treguard" - missing a quote mark.
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Erm.. no Master Replied Pickle" - quote mark in the wrong place, and should be a small "r".
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The huge Knight fell down the steps, disintegrating as it tell."
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"You must go on without me, my leg is very badly hurt As you wish." said Treguard" - missing two quote marks between the sentences.
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"Wish me luck!" He cried, picking up the Frightknight's sword..." Should be a small "h", assuming Treguard didn't randomly burst into tears after speaking!
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"Why you...muttered Treguard." Missing a quote mark.
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...all you must do is strike me once with that word and I will surrender" - I guess this is meant to be "sword"?
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So, it was you who saved me! exclaimed Treguard, how can I ever repay you?" Missing a couple more quote marks.
http://www.knightmare.com/fanzine/108/1 ... t-226.html
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You hove played the character for 6 years now..."
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...visa versa?" Should be "vice versa".
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...whilst mere mortals bottle on your behalf?"
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...I even wore it when riding a quadricylce..."
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...people tend to tread on the hack of my cloak..."
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What other roles hove you played this year?"
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In the first issue of TQ we sow a photo of you..."
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...we asked him who he would hove in his team for Knightmare, who would you chose?"
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...if I could chose just anybody..."
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...at least it wouldn't he dull!"
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How would you change the game it you could?"
http://www.knightmare.com/fanzine/108/1 ... t-227.html
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...aluminum suspended in resin powder..." Do we have to use the American spelling?!