Re:3 word story
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in a pit
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[full stop]
So Treguard prepared
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himself for the
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[Rounding up what there is so far:]
One day Treguard thought to himself: I think I'll go out today while it's dry and possibly pick a card, any card, or possibly a fresh flower that blooms in the Dunkley Wood where the hideous thing they call Ariadne, lies sleeping in a pit. So Treguard prepared himself for the journey out of
[And my three words:]
the comfort of
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his dingy castle
[And, a full stop]
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He summoned Folly
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with a yell
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and the jester
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appeared in a
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trice with his
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makeup freshly applied
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but his hair
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rather strangely unkempt
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expression which said
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More than words
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[full stop - although I feel an exclamation mark is more appropriate!]
Treguard simply smiled
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[to recap]
One day Treguard thought to himself: I think I'll go out today while it's dry and possibly pick a card, any card, or possibly a fresh flower that blooms in the Dunkley Wood where the hideous thing they call Ariadne, lies sleeping in a pit. So Treguard prepared himself for the journey out of his dingy castle. He summoned Folly with a yell and the jester appeared in a trice with his makeup freshly applied but his hair rather strangely unkempt and a strange expression which said more than words. Treguard simply smiled
[and now]
as he saw
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