Fanfic
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He might eat her if I could get him to shurrup for long enough. He likes ham. And she hammed the role up for all it was worth.
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LOL. I'm sure you're not the only one, dearie. But if it got her away from my hubby and my kitchen I'd be happy. He wouldn't even look at me, anyway, with my plastic fake nose, grey hair, old rags, and habit of shouting "Gerrout of it" over and over again. Plus half of me is now a bald wizard from Cornwall, which makes courting a bit tricky, dearie.
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Awwww...I'd court you if I wasn't straight
I'm getting confused about who I could court. I'm playing a combination of a male bald wizard from Cornwall who's been fused with an old woman. But she was originally played by a man. I don't know what's going on. Best stick to Mr. G., I guess.
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Hehehe...you know that chaos is ruling the world when a thread that started as feedback for a Knightmare fanfic eventually transforms into a discussion of the courting habits of a hybrid of a Cornish Wizard and an old lady keeper of a crippled Cerberus...
juggles watermelons
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Hehehe...you know that chaos is ruling the world when a thread that started as feedback for a Knightmare fanfic eventually transforms into a discussion of the courting habits of a hybrid of a Cornish Wizard and an old lady keeper of a crippled Cerberus...
juggles watermelons
LOL. Less of the old, thankyou dearie.
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Kully sends you all a kiss, and reminds me that she is going to be in the next fanfic I do, with a few surprises.
I've just got around to reading the latest one. Very good, I must say.
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Ok guys...likl dilemma. 'Kully' was around 13 pages long. This current fanfic has reached 4 pages in half an hour and the situation has only just been introduced...is that bad? It's sounding to me a bit Lord of the Ringsy too right now. Is that also bad? I keep thinking I'll get ragged at for using LOTR creatures...but I'm having fun writing it :S
HELP!
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Four pages can bring a lot of atmosphere etc, but I suggest you cut it down a little so the action can be brought forward a bit, otherwise you'll end up writing about 500 pages
There isnt too much wrong with it sounding like LOTR, as it was...well, good!
All I can suggest is try and concentrate on the most important bits of the build up to the story, and try and get to the action quicker. But there again, I don't know what on earth you have written do I? So I'll let you decide, and I know full well you have good writing capabilities anyway.
The choice is yours
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Just my humble opinion, but I'd say you shouldn't worry about the length of a story while you're writing it. Let it come naturally, being as long as it wants to be. Then, once it's done, leave it for a day, then come back to read through it. That way, it's easy to see if it's too quick, too long, or just right. Hope that helps!
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