KM Bonfire song/poem
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On the fifth of November
I saw a Guy hobbling
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On the fifth of November
I saw a Guy hobbling
He was drag - ing a very large sack...
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(I think that last line might scan a little better if the word 'very' were removed. But I suppose it's up to the next poet...)
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I was hoping that my line ending in 'hobbling' might induce a rhyming 4th line ending in 'goblin'! It won't work as well being the 5th line, but I'll try it anyway:
On the fifth of November
I saw a Guy hobbling
He was drag-ing a large sack
He emptied it out
Out tumbled a goblin
I have an idea about what the goblin and the 'Guy' have been doing, but I'll hold it back for now...
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(OK. Thanks.)
On the fifth of November
I saw a Guy hobbling
He was dragging a large sack
Containing a goblin
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Erm, so as not to leave a loose end, does anyone mind if I finish this off?
On the fifth of November
I saw a Guy hobbling
And dragging a large sack
Containing a goblin
I knew this because
The sack had got torn
By the creature inside
As he blew on his horn
I looked at the Guy
And without invitation
I asked him just why
There was this situation
"Because," said the Guy
At first softly, then louder
"I found this foul fiend
With a heap of gunpowder
Planning to blow up
The Dungeon. I fought him;
A bruise and an ankle-bite
Later, I caught him."
"So he got the sack!"
I declared with some breeziness
"For being a goblin
Who tried to be treasonous!"
"No," said Lord Fear
"He's now under my wing
So I can ensure
He succeeds with the thing!"
I wondered if maybe
I shouldn't have asked
That was until Lord Fear
Had lifted his mask
It was Pickle in costume
A devious liar!
We went off to light up
A goblin bonfire!
Coming soon... Knightmare haikus?
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