Fanfic
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Four pages can bring a lot of atmosphere etc, but I suggest you cut it down a little so the action can be brought forward a bit, otherwise you'll end up writing about 500 pages
There isnt too much wrong with it sounding like LOTR, as it was...well, good!
All I can suggest is try and concentrate on the most important bits of the build up to the story, and try and get to the action quicker. But there again, I don't know what on earth you have written do I? So I'll let you decide, and I know full well you have good writing capabilities anyway.
The choice is yours
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Just my humble opinion, but I'd say you shouldn't worry about the length of a story while you're writing it. Let it come naturally, being as long as it wants to be. Then, once it's done, leave it for a day, then come back to read through it. That way, it's easy to see if it's too quick, too long, or just right. Hope that helps!
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Damn, there are just not enough hours in the day...! I can't read it now as I have to rush off to catch the most luxurious of all coaches, the National Express; I wanted to print it off and take it on the coach with me, but my catridge has died on me, goddamnit! So now I am resigned to continuing another crappy novel during the journey and waiting to read your Fic when I get to Manchester. Is there no justice in this world??
I can't wait though Emii! ;D
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Me. Honest!
Very well written, and everything was in character. I always wondered why no teams tried that on the causeways before.
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You know I have!
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I will give you feedback. However, I'm quite a busy old crone/bald wizard composite, so it might be a few days.
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Yup, well I read the new one when Illusion put it on the site. It confused me, slightly, yet I liked the plot and the way you keep things moving. Emii, you're a good writer. You have a fast-paced style when it comes to these things. Honest.
I'd better go write a fic now....
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I read it!
Good points:
Well written
Good characterisation
Mogdred
Bad points:
A distinct lack of Atomic Pogo Sticks
I've already written Knightmare fanfics and got them to put up a Knightmare fic section at fanfiction.net (though they shot down my request for a Watermelon section. ). So there! Fight the power! Viva la revolution! Make the world safe for small iguanas everywhere! And don't take your medication! I never have, and I turned out perfectly flub-willypaloooooza!!!
(We apologise for the lack of sanity in this post)
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I've already written Knightmare fanfics and got them to put up a Knightmare fic section at fanfiction.net (though they shot down my request for a Watermelon section. ). So there! Fight the power! Viva la revolution! Make the world safe for small iguanas everywhere! And don't take your medication! I never have, and I turned out perfectly flub-willypaloooooza!!!
Nutter ;D
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