My Knightmare Dream
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Ok pickle
I'll post it hereYou can get better by reading and writing lots
My first story that I wrote was horrible.... -
I dunno about you Pickle but I was always pants at storywriting at school. Also I dont think I'd be confident enough in my own abilities to show any work I did to other more experienced and better writers, if you can believe that! hehe
Plus there's the time factor, and my lack of imagination.....
Oh well, guess I'll just have to read all your great fanfic!
hehe
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My story is mostly based on my puppy.... I'm currently having trouble at how I start the story.... and I was trembling when I gave a story I wrote (about a silver dragon called Silva and her adventure its called: The secret of Shadow-Forest) to my fawouwrite teacher.
I got more confidence by doing crazy stuff... well not that crazy: I took my stuffed wolf to school and used her as a model for a cartoon I was doing (I got lots of strange looks....but the cartoon is now hanging on the arts board)
I just want to know other peoples opinion about my stories so I can get better at writing
I have never been more nervous about doing something than this.... -
OK, Well I'll be happy to read your fic and give you feedback based on others I've read, if ya want, go on! post it up and I'll have a good nose!
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Its not ready yet....,but when it is I'll mail it here ;D
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Ok, I shall be waiting in anticipation, hehe
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Would ye like to name the dungeneer in my story?
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Yes I would, hehe, ooh, now I gotta think of a name, hmmmmmm
Call him Benny hehe
Or if you think that name's pants then call him whatever you want! hehe
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thats a good name, Benny he is then
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Yay! did you hear that everyone!
I thought up a GOOD NAME! hehe
You'd have never thought I had it in me! hehe
Either that or Snowwie's just being polite, hehe
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How did you know I was just being polite?!
Ok, I was just joking. Benny is a great name
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The Dungeoneers in my story are called Joshua, Sally, Daniel and Chris, all named after people I know^_^
Benny actually sounds kinda funny. Though I can see snowwies story right now:-
Bonnie(as advisor): Woof! (go round the table and eat the food)
Nikki(as dungeoneer: Ruff! eats the Egg Timer instead
oops!
Oh yeah snowwie! I decided to start mine earlier since I had a free period in English so I started it then! I should get the prologue done before the holiday!
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Sorry Brangewen
Nikki would eat the table as well (she's doing that right now....)
The kidsies in my little story are: Benny (the dungeneer) and Maria, Sara and Ferrit (ok I havent gotten a name for her yet...)
Maria was my friend, but I guess we were too different
Sara's my friend who I know from school. She's also a gothic
Um, Brangwen would you like to name the last advisor?
Good
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A girl
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Great name... mind if I name one of Nikki's puppys
Kayleigh?
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She hastn got puppies yet... she's only 3 months old! I meant when she has puppys one of the girls official name will be Kayleigh...
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